ELEMENTerre

-If you feel the Wind whistling
In your ears
I am the Air who whispers love
Kissing you.
-If you feel the Rain rolling down
Your cheeks
I am the Water who gives the life
Kissing you.
-If you feel the Heat burning up
Your skin
I am the Fire who gives you warmth
Kissing you.
-If you feel the Ground pushing up
Your feet
I am the Earth who embraces you
Kissing you.
-But if you don’t feel my Heart knocking
In your chest
It is because he Bits in the same time
As yours
And so when we be One I am
Kissing you

4 réflexions au sujet de « ELEMENTerre »

  1. A fascinating discussion is definitely worth comment.
    I do tink that you should write more on this topic, it might not be a taboo subject bbut
    generally people don’t speak about such subjects.

    To the next! All the best!!

    1. Thanks for reading, thanks for the words, and thanks for the encouragements. For the little story (you deserve it) I wrote this poem few minutes after having a textual discussion with a friend of mine who was living in mexico (I was in france). I used to live with her in her town over there in the other side of the Atlantic and when we finish chatting she told me she was going on her bike to see a friend. I knew the road she was going to take. I start to imagine her on her bike, with the wind in her short hair and the fresh air of the morning burning her cheeks and as I was on my bed and I was going to sleep I close the light when words start to arrived in my head. After few minute of watching those words going in my mind I decide to switch the light on to put this poem down. I look for paper and I start to wrote, few minute latter I got my poem, it was maybe one of my first poem ever.

    1. hey I just understand your comment ! Not surprisingly, we will say it’s because I’am french : )
      well if this poem permit you to go through the planet without putting your feet outside I am glad it can work like that with you, I will be happy to make you travel a bit more while staying where you are in the futur. All the best

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